Helping authors receive the feedback they long for (and need) to take essays, short stories and novels up to their next level brings me the greatest joy. Why? Most people don't believe they have the skills to be a great writer. Too many people fall for the notion that some people are just "born with it". I'm here to show you that YOU can become a great writer. With a little help in all the right places, your story will shine and deserve its place on any bookshelf!
I will provide you with suggestions to make each paragraph become the best version of itself. If I notice regularly occurring grammar and punctuation errors, I will point those out as well.
This is a great way to check and see if your opening pages are drawing the reader in. I provide suggestions to strengthen the structure and each paragraph.
This is a back-and-forth process. I will review and provide specific suggestions and send the material back to you. Once you've had a chance to reshape the material, I'll look at it again and provide an analysis of your work and a chance to ask questions.
For longer works, see Manuscript Review page